ONE OF THOSE HIDEOUS BOOKS WHERE THE MOTHER DIES
Bibliography:
Sones, Sonya. One of Those Hideous Books Where the Mother Dies. New York: Simon & Schuster Books for Young Readers, 2004.
ISBN: 0689858205
Plot Summary:
The novel in verse opens with the main character Ruby Millken on a plane to meet her famous father for the first time in her life. It has taken 16 years and her mothers death before she was finally able to meet her father. Ruby is not in love with the idea of uprooting her life and moving across the country from Boston, to Los Angeles leaving behind her "super hot" boyfriend Ray and best friend Lizzie, and live what she believes to be a father who forgot all about her. Ruby writes short stories in the form of a poems to convey her dramatic teenage angst about moving, love, being the new kid, and family struggles.
Critical Analysis:
Sonya Sones does not use a specific rhyme scheme or measure meters of lines and verses, but she does arrange the lines with in a stanza in a way that keeps the thoughts of Ruby bound together making it easier for the reader follow. She does, however, use repetition of words in selected poems to invite the reader to pay close attention the the internal thoughts of Ruby. For example, in the first poem of the novel she rights "I am not that depressed considering..." at the beginning of each line in order to build this list of worries, fears, and sadness that Ruby is experiencing while sitting on the plane heading to her father's house. The use of this repetition allows for the reader to know upfront what Ruby is battling internally.
In addition to repetition and line length, Sones sprinkles the use of onomatopoeia throughout the novel that makes the reader feel like they are their with Ruby in the moment. On page 56 Sones' writes a very eerie poem about Ruby's mother trying to escape her coffin, and it ends with "BEEP BEEP BEEP" of the alarm clock and Ruby wakes up. This use of the onomatopoeia alarms the reader just as it does Ruby and you want to know what was going to happen during this creepy dream, but just like with real dreams you cannot plan when you are going to wake up out of the dream; as the reader you feel that shock the same way Ruby does when she wakes up. Therefore, the use of this sound device allows the reader to connect with the protagonist.
Furthermore Sones' uses hyperbole as a way to develop the dramatic teenage that Ruby can tend to be throughout the novel. In almost all of her emails to her best friend Lizzie the reader gets to know that Ruby is quite the dramatic teen using hyperbole's such as "... the biggest tart in the entire galaxy is trying to steal my boyfriend while I'm stuck here..." and "...I have a zit on my nose the size of a giraffe"(p.94). Sones uses this literary device to characterize Ruby and help the young readers connect to the character.
Another literary device that Sones' uses is imagery in conjunction with similes and metaphors. On page 193 her poem is about some of Ruby's after school activities one of where she describes her and her fathers ",trainer/assistant," Max "lazing on two rubber rafts/in the middle of the pool/floating in a galaxy of sun stars." This description makes the reader want to be in the pool with this duo enjoying warm LA. Sones is especially good at creating imagery that is appealing for teenage readers.
The emotions in this book are intense for the entire novel. Sones does a splendid job at making the reader feel like a teenager again. The reader is invested in the drama of Ruby's life, and you don't feel exasperated by it because Ruby is such a likable girl and you want her to have a happy ending, so you keep turning the pages hoping that she will get some solitude and peace with all of her life changes.
The novel is written where almost every page is a poem and they vary in length from a full page of four lines per stanza to smaller poems of five stanzas of two lines. Each poems title also doubles as the first line of the poem, a clever trick and technique that should be pointed out to students trying to write their own poem. From time to time the novel breaks from poems to slip in a few emails and letters that Ruby writes to Ray, Lizzie, and her deceased mother. There are numerous teachable moments with in this text, including how to deal with change, death, loss of friendship, and how to forgive.
Review Excerpts:
"A satisfying, moving novel."
- Booklist, starred review
"A winning portrayal of a teenage girl's loves and losses."
- Publishers Weekly
"Ruby's voice is pitch-perfect."
- Bookpage
"It's Ruby's first-person voice--acrimonious, raw, and very funny--that pulls everything together..."
-Booklist
"...Ruby's story is gripping, enjoyable, and memorable"
-School Library Journal
Iowa Teen Award 2007
Connections:
Other Books in Verse by Sonya Sones
Use in reading class for reluctant readers
Use in humanities class to teach tolerance and understanding
Critical Analysis:
Sonya Sones does not use a specific rhyme scheme or measure meters of lines and verses, but she does arrange the lines with in a stanza in a way that keeps the thoughts of Ruby bound together making it easier for the reader follow. She does, however, use repetition of words in selected poems to invite the reader to pay close attention the the internal thoughts of Ruby. For example, in the first poem of the novel she rights "I am not that depressed considering..." at the beginning of each line in order to build this list of worries, fears, and sadness that Ruby is experiencing while sitting on the plane heading to her father's house. The use of this repetition allows for the reader to know upfront what Ruby is battling internally.
In addition to repetition and line length, Sones sprinkles the use of onomatopoeia throughout the novel that makes the reader feel like they are their with Ruby in the moment. On page 56 Sones' writes a very eerie poem about Ruby's mother trying to escape her coffin, and it ends with "BEEP BEEP BEEP" of the alarm clock and Ruby wakes up. This use of the onomatopoeia alarms the reader just as it does Ruby and you want to know what was going to happen during this creepy dream, but just like with real dreams you cannot plan when you are going to wake up out of the dream; as the reader you feel that shock the same way Ruby does when she wakes up. Therefore, the use of this sound device allows the reader to connect with the protagonist.
Furthermore Sones' uses hyperbole as a way to develop the dramatic teenage that Ruby can tend to be throughout the novel. In almost all of her emails to her best friend Lizzie the reader gets to know that Ruby is quite the dramatic teen using hyperbole's such as "... the biggest tart in the entire galaxy is trying to steal my boyfriend while I'm stuck here..." and "...I have a zit on my nose the size of a giraffe"(p.94). Sones uses this literary device to characterize Ruby and help the young readers connect to the character.
Another literary device that Sones' uses is imagery in conjunction with similes and metaphors. On page 193 her poem is about some of Ruby's after school activities one of where she describes her and her fathers ",trainer/assistant," Max "lazing on two rubber rafts/in the middle of the pool/floating in a galaxy of sun stars." This description makes the reader want to be in the pool with this duo enjoying warm LA. Sones is especially good at creating imagery that is appealing for teenage readers.
The emotions in this book are intense for the entire novel. Sones does a splendid job at making the reader feel like a teenager again. The reader is invested in the drama of Ruby's life, and you don't feel exasperated by it because Ruby is such a likable girl and you want her to have a happy ending, so you keep turning the pages hoping that she will get some solitude and peace with all of her life changes.
The novel is written where almost every page is a poem and they vary in length from a full page of four lines per stanza to smaller poems of five stanzas of two lines. Each poems title also doubles as the first line of the poem, a clever trick and technique that should be pointed out to students trying to write their own poem. From time to time the novel breaks from poems to slip in a few emails and letters that Ruby writes to Ray, Lizzie, and her deceased mother. There are numerous teachable moments with in this text, including how to deal with change, death, loss of friendship, and how to forgive.
Review Excerpts:
"A satisfying, moving novel."
- Booklist, starred review
"A winning portrayal of a teenage girl's loves and losses."
- Publishers Weekly
"Ruby's voice is pitch-perfect."
- Bookpage
"It's Ruby's first-person voice--acrimonious, raw, and very funny--that pulls everything together..."
-Booklist
"...Ruby's story is gripping, enjoyable, and memorable"
-School Library Journal
Iowa Teen Award 2007
Connections:
Other Books in Verse by Sonya Sones
- To Be Perfectly Honest
- Stop Pretending: What Happened When My Big Sister Went Crazy
- What My Mother Doesn't Know
- What My Girlfriend Doesn't Know
Use in reading class for reluctant readers
Use in humanities class to teach tolerance and understanding